In
this essay I will be looking at pre 1914 poetry written by William
Blake. I am going to discuss how Blake conveys his attitudes towards
the society that he lived in. The 4 main poems that I am going to
study in detail are, ‘The Ecchoing Green’, ‘The Garden of
Love’, ‘London’, and finally ‘The Human Abstract’. These 4
poems can be linked to the other poems that I will be mentioning; in
the way that Blake presents us with the images of where he used to
live.
‘The
Ecchoing Green’ conveys Blake’s idea of an idealised society. He
does this through exploring the themes of nature, community,
relationships (between adult and child,) and the states of innocence
and experience. In the poem there are two generations of people
speaking, adults and children. The children tell of their freedom and
happiness, whilst the adults tell us of the darker more sinister
things that go in society. The poem begins with the beginning of the
day, ‘the sun does arise,’ which also gives the poem a positive
tone, ‘the merry the bells ring.’ He also uses the phrase, ‘the
birds of the bush,’ because it gives you a picture of nature and a
sense of freedom which suggests a carefree society. In the first
stanza Blake uses the human sense of sound to get across the
cheerfulness on ‘the Ecchoing Green.’ For example,’ sing louder
around.’ Also stanza 1 symbolises the beginning of spring which can
be associated with nature and joy. The end of the stanza,’ while
our sports shall be seen on the Ecchoing Green,’ suggests that you
should make the most of what you have as it may not last. Here Blake
is trying to get across his idea that in society everything may not
be as it seems and you should enjoy it while it lasts.
In
stanza 2 there is a change in the tone of the poem, it presents you
with Old John who is watching the children, whilst he sits under the
old oak. The oak tree suggests wisdom and experience as the oak is
the tree of knowledge. The second line,’ does laugh away care,’
shows that he has probably seen it all before. This stanza gives us
the experience of Old John and then gives us a contrast with the
innocence of the children.
In
stanza 3 Blake changes the tone of the poem again and it becomes more
serious and an adult is speaking instead of a child, this indicates
that Blake’s idea of the society is changing hi is now starting to
show us his thoughts on how things in society can change and how
dangerous it could become. You can tell that there is a change in
voice because (from child to adult) from the line,’ when we were
all girls and boys.’ The line suggests that the adults are now
looking out for their children and Blake is saying that they were
safe to play when they were children but now the society is not safe
and neither are the children. This clearly shows Blake’s change in
his attitude towards his society.
In
the final stanza it is the end of the day and the choice of language
used by Blake suggests this, he begins to use words such as ‘weary’.
Also the last stanza has a negative tone to it. The line,’ round
the laps of their mothers,’ sounds like everyone is ready to go
home and it is as if they are being confined to their houses as it is
not safe anymore. ‘Like birds in their nests,’ is personification
and the use of the simile makes it sound as if the birds are ready to
rest and they are not as active. This also indicates a natural bond
and a sense of protection between mother and child. Also at the end,’
sport no more seen,’ suggests that it is getting dark and there is
nothing left to do, and the last line,’ darkening Green,’ sounds
very threatening and quite sinister. The last stanza is also a
contrast to the 1st
stanza, as there are not any sound senses unlike in the 1st.
Blake uses this to present his idea of sinister things happening, and
that the society he lived in is not as safe as it used to be. ‘The
Ecchoing Green’ has the same structure as that of a story, it
begins with the rising of the sun and ends with the sun setting and
everything coming to an end. This structure helps, as you can clearly
see the way in which Blake’s attitudes towards the society he lived
in change.
The
poem ‘The Laughing Song’ can be closely linked to ‘The Ecchoing
Green,’ as it conveys the same ideas and themes of nature and
community. It also links nature with joy and happiness like the first
poem,’ when the meadows laugh with lively green.’ Also ‘The
Laughing Song’ has the same positive tone as ‘The Ecchoing
Green.’ There is also a sense of community in the poem like in the
first one as it says,’ and be merry and join with me,’ showing
that everyone comes together in society.
‘The
Garden of Love’ conveys Blake’s idea of disappointment and upset
as his idealised society turns into a living nightmare. The poem is
told from one person’s point of view. The poem begins in a negative
tone and it presents us with the themes of death and despair. In
stanza 1 Blake shows disappointment,’ saw what I never had seen,’
this shows that he had happy memories of the garden and that he feels
let down by society. When it says,’ Garden of Love,’ it sounds
romantic and happy and the name gives us an implied meaning, but as
you read on through the poem you realise the title is ironic. As you
get to the end of the 1st
stanza you begin to get an eerie feeling,’ in the midst,’ so you
cannot see the chapel. The stanza ends with the line,’ used to play
on the green,’ this is a link with ‘The Ecchoing Green,’ as he
used to play there and he remembers how it was when he was young, as
he did in the 1st
poem.
In
stanza 2 Blake shows how much he relied on the Garden and how it let
him down,’ turn’d to the Garden of Love,’ it also shows how
Blake’s attitude changes as he loves the Garden at the beginning
but then he is let down and he feels despair and hate towards the
society for letting the Garden get so bad. Also in stanza 2 Blake
conveys images of life and happiness,’ so many sweet flower bore,’
this is a contrast to stanza 1. Stanza 2 also includes images of the
church, when he mentions a sign on the gate which reads,’ thou
shalt not,’ this is a command and Blake is forbidden to enter, this
upsets Blake and the use of the law conveys Blake’s real feelings
about the society he lived in. He feels like he has been locked out
and abandoned by the society. This feeling is also shown in the
line,’ gates of the chapel were shut,’ where again it is very
unwelcoming and restricting. At the end of the stanza Blake chooses
nature,’ so I turn’d to the Garden of Love. The garden represents
the Garden of Eden which was made by God, so again he chooses God,
and he rejects a man-made interpretation of religion.
In
the final stanza Blake again mentions the themes of death and
despair,’ filled with graves.’ Also the ‘tomb-stones,’ are a
contrast with the flowers in the 2nd
stanza, this is a contrast between life and death. This contrast and
the structure of the stanzas, (the way they are ordered,) convey
Blake’s views on society and how life can quickly change to death
without any notice. The second line of the stanza,’ priests in
black gowns, were walking their rounds,’ is again very unwelcoming
and depressing and it gives you an image of the grim reaper which is
associated with death. The line sounds like the priests are in a
trance, that they have to do this; also they seem emotionless and
uncaring. The final line of the stanza,’ binding with briars, my
joys and desires,’ sounds like Blake’s hopes are tied up and
cannot be accomplished. The poem leaves Blake feeling trapped and
lonely, and this structure and the adjectives on the last line convey
how alone
Blake feels and it is like the society is against him.
Blake feels and it is like the society is against him.
The
poem ‘Holy Thursday’ can be closely linked to ‘The Garden of
Love,’ as they both convey the same ideas of nature and theme of
despair, and life turning into death. Also the line,’ rich and
fruitful land,’ implies happiness and life, like it does with the
flowers in ‘The Garden of Love.’ In ‘The Garden of Love,’
Blake is left disappointed and in this poem,’ babes reduced to
misery,’ so again people are left alone and sad. Also the line,’
fed with cold and usurious hands,’ means that the children have no
love or care shown towards them, this is just like in ‘The Garden
of Love,’ when Blake is not welcome in the garden and he feels like
an intruder, and no-one wants him there. In ‘Holy Thursday,’ the
historical context of the poem influences the misery caused. Children
used to be left on the doorstep of a church on Thursdays if they were
not wanted or if their parents could not afford to keep them,
therefore this caused the poverty and misery in the society. The
nature and joy in’ Holy Thursday’ turns into misery,’ can it be
a song of joy,’ it sounds impossible for it to be a happy song,
like in the previous poem the contrast is clear. There is also
another link which is, that in the previous poem all the priests seem
as if they are in a trance, and this is also witnessed in ‘Holy
Thursday,’ when it says,’ it is a land of poverty,’ this
implies that everyone is poor and living a life of misery, so these
people would seem lifeless like they were also in a trance. The poems
are also similar in the way that Blake feels towards his society he
feels betrayed and alone, and both poems end with Blake feeling
restricted and alone in the society he lived in. His attitude changes
from caring about his society to feeling he doesn’t belong there
and this is clearly shown in the way that Blake structures each
stanza and the way the language he uses emphasises this.
‘London’
conveys Blake’s idea of a lower class social commentary. The poem
begins in a negative tone and this continues throughout the entire
poem. In the 1st
stanza, Blake describes how sad and upset all the people of London
are,’ Marks of weakness, marks of woe.’ This shows how Blake is
being affected by the sadness of others in the society he lives in,
and the line,’ and mark in every face I meet,’ emphasises this by
the word mark. It does this because, mark sounds permanent like it
will last forever, as will the sadness of the people. So we can
already see how Blake’s attitude is changing. Also in the 1st
stanza Blake shows a clear emphasis on the word ‘every,’ which
shows that it the sadness is going on in every street throughout
London. On the 2nd
line the word ‘charter’d,’ indicates a sense of restriction
that the streets and even the Thames have been restricted, just like
the people.
In
the 2nd
stanza, Blake revisits the idea of fear within the society, when he
says,’ in every infants cry of fear.’ The choice of the infants
within the poem suggests child suffering and poverty, which tells you
how bad things really are in London. This part of the poem has been
influenced by the historical context of the poem, as in pre 1914
times children were seen as a lower class, and they were not wanted,
and used as slaves, so Blake uses this idea to get across the real
impact and suffering of the time, so his negative attitude towards
his society is really coming across in the language he is using. The
line,’ in every ban,’ a ban is a curse and this symbolises
frustration which Blake is trying to get across, also anger and
corruption is presented to us.
In
the 3rd
stanza, Blake mentions,’ how the chimney-sweepers cry,’ this
again refers to the social and historical context of the poem, as the
chimney sweeps would have been children and they would have been
forced up the chimneys, and some children even died, they were
treated as slaves. He again uses the word ‘cry’ to emphasise the
real pain of the children. You begin to feel that Blake hates his
society for this. The next line,’ every blackning Church appalls,’
a church in these times was a social institution, and Blake felt that
the church was cruel to those in need. The church was thought to be
evil and sinister and progressively getting worse, this is a contrast
to the image of innocence that the church is supposed to emit. The
3rd
line,’ the hapless soldiers sigh,’ is also an example of the
lower class people in London, because the soldiers did not get paid
very much, for risking their lives. They also experienced suffering
and the structure of the 3rd
stanza shows the change in Blake’s increasingly unhappy attitude
towards the society he lived in. The last line of this stanza,’
runs in blood down palace walls,’ is a contrast to the rest of the
poem because, this gives you an idea of the monarchy, as they are
rich and in the upper class, whereas the rest of the poem focuses on
the lower class of society. The walls of the palace are probably to
keep out the poor, as they were believed to be diseased, and the
walls are very restrictive. At the end of the poem Blake feels left
out again as he has in the other poems that I have looked at.
In
the final stanza, the negativity of Blake is at its worst, when it
says,’ how the youthful harlots curse,’ it is linked to the
diseases mentioned earlier on as Harlots would have not had any
protection and they would have spread STD’s across the society,
which refers again to the social and historical context of the poem.
The last line of the poem,’ the marriage hearse,’ is ironic
because, marriage is meant to be happy but then Blake ruins the only
happy part of the poem by adding the word hearse, which is related to
death. So yet again the poem ends on a negative phrase, this really
shows us how Blake dislikes his society, as it has let him down
before. Also the structure of the poem and the rhyme scheme which is,
ab, ab throughout the entire poem, makes the poem sound more serious.
‘London,’
is a complete contrast with the ‘Ecchoing Green,’ as the tone in
this poem is much more negative than before. It can also be linked
with the progression of ideas in ‘The Garden of Love,’ as Blake
makes us believe that there is something positive to come, whereas he
is really building us up for a big drop in his attitude and the tone
of the poem. Also Blake starts off in each poem with a bad vision and
then they progressively get worse until the poem reaches the end.
‘The
Human Abstract,’ conveys Blake’s idea of death and God, which are
contrasting ideas. The poem is again set in a negative tone. In the
1st
stanza, ‘pity would be no more if we did not make somebody poor,’
is a contrast in ideas, as it means that you cannot have virtue
without sin. The last two lines of the stanza are exactly the same as
the first two as they are using the same contrast. This shows that
there cannot be good without bad, so Blake is saying that nothing can
ever be good in his society.
In
the 2nd
stanza, the first line means that if you fear people, then if you
don’t do anything it will result in peace by default, which is
again a contrast. The next line,’ selfish loves increase,’ is
again in a very negative tone as Blake is saying that there needs to
be more of this even though it is bad. This shows that he would do
anything to improve his life and society. The word ‘cruelty’
appears in the next line, and the first letter is a capital which
signifies the importance of it. A sense of restriction is mentioned
in the line,’ knits a snare,’ this sounds like cruelty is trying
to trap all the people in the society and they are all being hunted.
The last line of the stanza, ‘and spreads his baits with care,’
is personification, and it sounds as if cruelty is being careful, but
really it is sinister signifying death and suffering. The adjectives
that Blake has chosen so far in this poem help to emphasise his real
hate towards the society, and that he feels that nothing can be done
to make it better.
In
the 3rd
stanza, Blake begins with,’ holy fears,’ so now Blake is having
fears about religion, and fears of hell and the consequences, that
are death. Then Blake gives us images of someone crying, and feeling
guilty, this gives us images of growth, and it may be the beginning
of personal growth. He may be starting to believe that his society
could change and he could be happy. The word ‘roots’ on the 3rd
line also present us with a thought of growth and progression.
In
the 4th
stanza, the tone changes from slightly positive back to negative as
the poem began in this way. ‘Spreads the dismal shade,’ sounds
creepy and dark and miserable, so Blake’s attitude is changing back
to feeling alone and left out, he does this in this stanza by using
dull adjectives. Blake is then presented with an air of mystery, on
the 2nd
line, and he begins to feel confused and he does not know what is
happening around him, in society. The stanza ends, with the
mentioning of a ‘caterpillar and fly,’ these are known as pests
today and parts of nature, which is supposed to be happy and
positive. But really they spread diseases and feed on other peoples
feelings. But the caterpillar also transforms into something
beautiful so Blake obviously now feels that something good could come
from his society, so yet again Blake’s attitude changes back to a
positive one.
In
the 5th
stanza, Blake feels tricked by temptation as the fruit of deceit is
used to make him believe that everything will be alright, whereas
really he is being deceived. In the 3rd
line it says,’ the raven his nest has made,’ the raven is used
because it is associated with cruel, evil things and is known as a
bad omen. The stanza finishes with the line,’ in its thickest
shade,’ this gives a feeling that something dark and sinister is
going on. Also the surroundings emphasise the negative image of the
raven. This stanza leaves Blake feeling confused about his attitude
towards his society.
In
the final stanza, the 1st
two lines, present us with a well hidden tree, which seems mysterious
as it is unknown to the society. On the first line it mentions ‘Gods’
which are the creators of humans, but there is a hidden cruelty in
this line, as Blake is presented with more than one God so he does
not know what to believe. In the last line of the stanza it says,’
human brain,’ this shows that it is in everyone, and the whole poem
is summed up in this line, the poem seems insignificant after this
line. It means that there is good and bad in everyone. At the end of
this poem Blake’s attitude towards his society changes, he begins
to think that maybe his society could change and become a place that
he would like to live in.
‘London’
can be linked to ‘The Human Abstract,’ because they both convey
the same idea of how people and humanity in general are presented. It
can also be linked with ‘The Lilly,’ because this poem also
mentions nature and its positive and negative images. The poem also
begins with a negative line,’ the modest rose puts forth a thorn,’
put as you get into the poem positive images come through in the
language that Blake chooses.
Overall,
I think that throughout all of the poems mentioned in my essay, there
is a clear trend in the way that Blake conveys his attitude towards
the society that he lived in. He uses language, structure, images and
contrasting ideas to do this. He uses powerful adjectives and a clear
tone in each poem to emphasise his true feelings about the society he
lived in. I also think that overall Blake feels confused about his
attitude, but more than often Blake feels disappointment and hatred
about his society. He feels this way because, in most of the poems he
is left feeling trapped, restricted or left out of his society. He
does not entirely hate his society because, in the final two poems we
witness a change in the tone and Blake begins to feel that he could
change his society.
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